FREE VERSE
1st Prize
Weekend Away by
Edith Ward
The
top drawer in the dressing table
smells of someone else’s perfume.
Someone
else’s cigarette
has
put a mark on the dressing table top.
The
beds are hard but for two days
we
belonged to this room.
The
fluffy whites droop in the bathroom,
the
hotel soap sits in its own juices
and
the shower caps have eloped.
In
the wardrobe the non-steal coat hangers
clink together waiting to do battle
with the next resident’s clothes.
There’s
always a broken one,
who
leans against the others
in
the empty wardrobe.
Someone
had messed up
the
digital alarm clock in the room
and
it wakened us at one in the morning.
We
couldn’t find the ‘off’ button
and
the noise awoke the room next door,
who
banged on the wall.
We
think it was the man with the wig
and
the woman who doesn’t have
the
cooked breakfast, who sit on table six.
The
room is stripped of us.
Dirty
glasses group together,
the
bin is full of yesterday’s papers,
tissues and an old pair of natural tan tights.
The
comfort tray has been drained
of
all but the sugar.
Tomorrow
he will make tea and coffee
for
someone else.
There’s
a tug on the heart when we leave,
as
the ‘Do not disturb’ notice on the door
rocks a gentle goodbye.
2nd Prize
The Retailer’s Tale by
A F Harrold
Before
I got into poetry I got out of retail,
but
before I got out of retail I ran a book shop,
providing books to pirates,
until we were picketed by a pacifist amputee group – the Harmless Armless –
after which I stocked safe plain prosthetic hands,
and
changed the name to the Second Hand Shop,
which led to some confusion when horologists started asking
for
second hands – that is the smallest subdividing moving markers of a watch face
–
so, faced with supply and demand,
I
promptly changed the shop’s name again to the Second Hand And
Hand Shop,
and
ran a scheme where I bought back people’s prosthetics
as
they upgraded to smarter models and soon had a pile of second-hand hands,
but
since on the other hand a second-hand second hand is rarely worth much at all
I
only sold them new,
so
the shop became the First-Hand Second Hand and Second-Hand Second Hand Shop.
Until
the bottom fell out of the hand market and I tried something else.
Moving
to the seaside I opened a Flip-Flop Shop
followed by a Fish & Ship Shop, catering for all nautical needs,
and
my unique venture in which a white English gentleman promoted urban music,
the
Hip Hip! Hip Hop Shop. (It shut.)
I
moved on to the Stop Watching the Stop Watch Stop Shop,
a
guidance centre for people who couldn’t control the urge
to
watch stop watches until the stopped.
Then
there was a shop which didn’t sell a lot, but had it very neatly displayed,
the
Ship Shape Shop. It went under.
There
was the store that sold the B-sides to singles which never charted,
the
Flip-side of the Flop Shop,
and
then my ultimate circus emporium, the Non-Stop One Stop Big Top Shop.
After
that I moved to Edinburgh,
and
opened a store selling a children’s playground game,
which was my Scotch Hopscotch Shop.
As
a sideline I stocked some home-brewing kits, using only locally sourced
products,
and
renamed the place the Scotch Hopscotch and Scotch Hops Shop.
I
sold Old English Bards in the Scop Shop
and
equine footfalls in the Clop Shop,
before moving into Greek jazz with my Bebop Aesop Shop,
limited haircuts in the Flattop Shop,
and
an Irish band, ballet gear and a variety of moisture
in
the Raindrop/Dewdrop U2 Tutu Shop.
For
Vikings I ran the Longship Shop,
for
Admirals the Flagship Shop,
for
Archbishops the Worship Shop
and
for War Veterans there was Shell Shop.
For
folk who liked to watch small pieces of old hardwood vessels be made smaller
still
I
ran an Antique Teak Ship Chip Chop Shop.
I
sold French children’s stories, a Hannah-Barbera
character and certain shaved mammals
in
the Bare Bear, Babar, Booboo Shop,
and
polarised cans containing parts of a Belgian reporter and a Hollywood
dog
in
my Tinted Rin Tin Tintin
Tin Shop.
If
you needed to make animals go away you should have come to my Shoo Shop,
and
for very light pastry there was my Choux Shop.
Then
there was an Ape Shop, a Cape
Shop,
a
South American Dictatorship Shop, a Sheep Shop,
and
an Everything’s Going Cheep Shop – which sold baby birds in old jokes.
I
became a floor walker in the Grammatical Deportment Department Store:
the
ground floor opened onto the mall in a semi-colon and colon colonnade,
the
first floor housed the bracket booth and the comma counter,
the
second floor supplied cedillas and circumflexes,
alongside the solidus/slash/oblique section, the dot and dash desk and the tilde
till.
If
you were willing to wait we could order in an ellipsis.
Eventually
I left there lit with literacy,
and
spent a period of time I the Full Stop Shop,
but
then I stopped.
3rd Prize
Textures of November
by Margaret Wilmot
(extracts)
Perspectives (14 November)
There
is condensation on the window again; the nights
are
getting cold. Autumn this year has
arrived incrementally:
shorter days; leaf- and apple-fall; now the temperature falling.
I
locate a scarf before pedalling off to Art Class where
the
still life’s tones of beige and white nudge the month yet further on.
My
paternal grandmother was born today. She
visited when
she
was 88, sat by the window reading a Pelican History
of
the USA,
fascinated by the new perspective.
She
was born in Horse Heaven Country in 1897, in the south
of
Washington State.
Was it my grandfather’s family who
arrived at the Columbia River in a covered
wagon
just too late for the last ferry of the season?
They
had to spend the winter with the ferryman, eating cabbage.
I
pedal madly to get home before the season turns treacherous.
Seeing (15 November)
Out
a different window I suddenly see small flowers,
almost oriental in their sparseness, dotting the grafted cherry.
Each
year they surprise afresh, and more from this angle,
above. I turn back to the Home Office
form on the desk
I’ve
commandeered, locate numbers, a document, recent photograph –
and
that too looks strange. Bill pointed out
in Art Class
that even mirrors can’t show us what others see.
An
article about a current exhibition remarks
on
the curious fact that it is only artists who can choose
the
face they want to show the world. I have
little idea
what face would be most comfortable, but I’d love
to
see through the mask of me; see with no barrier into
the
garden from a house built of great transparent blocks
the
day before Adam and Eve arrived on the scene.
Ordinary Things (16
November)
I
glance up and there’s a brilliant light just
hanging there high in the sky’s emptiness.
Of
course, it’s the moon but already there’s been
that catch of wonder, the heart has skipped before
this miracle, which only illustrates again
the
old sermon how the ordinary things in
Nature,
would be greater miracles than the extraordinary,
which we admire most, if they were done but once.
Bird-song. How out of a tiny throat music
comes
pouring everywhere. Long ago I gave up
asking
which bird is this? Almost always it was a
blackbird,
or
a thrush, or the delicate English robin.
Let’s not start on seeds.
Still
the moon exerts its pull though now light is seeping
into the sky, diluting the darkness into the bluest ink.
VERSE USING RHYME
1st Prize
Service with a Smile
by Doreen Hinchliffe
Clarke’s
the
shoe shop
with the strange machine
that clicked and whirred
and
turned my feet fluorescent green
till I could see them shining
through the dark brown leather of my lace-ups,
where Mum would watch me wiggle
bright emerald toes
and
never failed to marvel at the miracle.
Vallance’s
the
record shop
where rainy winter afternoons
were whiled away
with Perry Como and Pat Boone
their disembodied voices drifting through
the
holes inside a soundproofed both
in
which my dad and I would settle down
to
listen to the latest 45s
and
dither over how to spend our half a crown.
Frederick
Totty’s
ladies underwear
for
the fuller figure
where Gran went all her life for corsets
and
never realised she was getting bigger
with Frederick
dancing his discreet attendance,
unfolding intimate garments
while I watched behind a screen, unseen, unheard,
intrigued by how he glided between ladies,
assessing sizes without uttering a word.
Butterworth’s
with sweets
of
every colour crammed
in
jars on dusty shelves
a
half-hearted bell above a door that slammed
and
then a heady mix of smells
snuff and pipe tobacco, peppermint and ginger,
where Five Boys chocolate always
promised acclamation,
and
I’d hover over liquorice, pear drops, sherbet,
tasting the flavour of delicious hesitation.
Marshall
and Snelgrove’s
exclusive, high class
drapery and department store,
its
coat of arms engraved in gold
above the great revolving door
through which we’d venture sometimes as a family
then huddle together in alien territory,
talking in whispers as we walked the perfumed aisles,
afraid our accent might betray us, or we’d somehow
show our lowly breeding by our nervous smiles.
2nd Prize
Off The Anchorage, Scapa Flow
2006 by Don Nixon
The
moonlight sets and freezes on the sea.
Foam
splinters into shards of glittering light,
Breakers
like salvoes broadside through the night,
Gunshot
waves explode in the headland’s lee.
Out
there, the ocean slides, uncluttered, free,
Except
for genuflecting buoys, red bright,
Held
fast by anchors, rusting chains hauled tight
Which
strain down to a grim finality.
Above,
poetic moonlit fancies fade;
Dawn
clarifies in monochrome and grey
Torn
shattered hulks, war’s iron coffins splayed,
Behemoths
cornered in a deadly fray.
Tombs
rusting with ribbed sea drift overgrown
A steel walled charnel house of mingled bone.
3rd Prize
Driven to The Edge by June Drake
Occasionally
I cannot bear to stay
and
have to take a turn around the block.
I
know like hell I should not go away
and
leave her there alone, perhaps to stock
the
fridge with socks she’s taken from my drawer
or
rearrange the yoghurts in the sink.
She
likes to lift the carpet from the floor
believing that it makes the kitchen stink.
This
is the lass who brought me so much joy
and
comfort too, for over fifty years.
How
proud we were when she produced a boy
and,
later on, a girl, allaying fears
that he would have to be the only one:
she
was a model mother to them both.
She
can’t remember now, those days of fun
and
laughter, how we marvelled at their growth.
I’m
no great cook but do the best I can
with things I know she likes. Yes,
even cakes.
However,
if I turn my back, the pan
is
emptied down the sink in just two shakes
because, she says, we had that yesterday.
I
bite my tongue and force a smile again
and
tell myself it’s just a game we play,
as
some misguided way to hide the pain.
The
evil thing that eats into her mind
will swallow me as well, if I’m not strong
and
patient. When I’m forced to be unkind
for
safety’s sake, I hate myself. It’s
wrong.
I
try to make her laugh as I remove
the
spoons she’d hidden deep within her vest
and
not to show at all I disapprove.
God
take her soon and give us both a rest.
FREE VERSE
Highly Commended
Farm Lanes by
Brett Van Toen
Sundays can’t be wasted, a day to spend out above the
farms, finding open ground
space to be explored. Picnic among the hills, shelter behind broken stone walls.
Under
a cosh of imaginings we set out early, nervous, twitchy, high hopes.
To
find a perfect place to be, a better way.
Mornings with the air so blue
you
hope to break through the eggshell into somewhere else. Sky too tight
for it not to crack. Climbing
into the magic car we left, top down, the safety off,
car
cocked and about to go off, me, head down rear gunner, toy rifle. Taking out
the
passers by. But Yorkshire
farm lanes trapped my parents, every time.
Edges
of the road reached out, verges with hidden rocks, brambles
scratched the morning good mood as I knew they would. The lanes
inevitably faded into farmyards overflowed with rustery,
melted stone walls,
celandines, manure. Cheeks sucked in,
sighing, tight lipped, paled, then snapped,
eventually shouting, How can you be so
stupid, it was obvious! I told you! Failure!
We
always had to turn in the yard embarrassed and Mum was right, it was clear,
grass grew down the middle of the road, the way the tarmac faded out.
A notice saying “Hillside Farm”. The
row hopped a couple of times
until divorce was mentioned with relief.
Eventually air cleared as it might
after a thunderstorm, someone pleaded and cried – who kept count apart from
them?
Me,
I’m caught by time not space. The
deadline finds match heads stuck between the tiles.
Enough joints undone each day for all the tools to be left out in a
corner of the room.
The
garden fails entirely at the edges even when each single bed is done.
Just
so in 4.5 billion years the world was almost finished. Which is why
we
can’t quite dance or play the guitar.
Only in the centre is my wall quite plumb.
So
time pricks my temper like a bad bald bull and serendipity is going out to go
nowhere.
Both
side roads and missed appointments bleed us playfully. But I met Hecate, Goddess
of
crossroads, turnings in both time and space last night. She decorates she says idly,
areas between highways. Lost ways are
lost, as Dad always claimed, justifiably.
Remembrance Day
by D B C Reed
In
his last year
I
stood with my father
at
the village memorial
as
he laid a wreath.
He’d
been in a reserved occupation
during the war, but my mother’s cooking
drove him to volunteer for the R.A.F.
He
was only accepted as a third-class packer
after the aptitude test.
He
wore a very good bowler
for
the service
slightly pushed to the back of his head
so
he always looked like a bookmaker
out
at Friars Wash.
The
Fallen in 1914-18
made a pretty impressive list
of
names still current in the village
for
breaking the law when pissed.
Once
on Boxing Day
walking pubwards up the High Street
we
came on one of them
locked in a tight embrace
with the local constable
who,
getting nowhere, gasped
“Send
for the Police!”
My
father, then a JP
was
engaged in charming my fiancée
so
side-stepped this new struggle
without a break in his repartee
and
entered the bar to acclaim.
On
the other side of the valley
I
could see the hills rise in unbroken acres
save for a pump that stood distinct;
it
leaned forward like a falling man
its
handle stuck out straight.
Once
I had worked this pump
destructively, as a child,
and
a warm smell had emerged amid the guttering,
choking gasps.
With
long convulsions
a
stream of water
ran
swiftly
then sank into the ground.
Hell Returns for an
Extended Run by John Feakins
A
savage storm hit the city
Driving
its citizens away,
Those
that could flee
In
their big cars
Sped
out of the way,
Before
the horrors
Of
destruction swept
Their
lives and possessions
To
nothing, in the terror
They
grabbed what little
They
could and packed
Their necessary treasures.
Those
that remained, old,
Infirm,
poor, bewildered,
Surrendered
to the full
Fury of the onslaught.
Becoming
the first, but
By
no means last, victims
Of
this predictable violence,
The
buildings collapsed
Under
the weight of the assault,
Bodies
lay distributed unevenly
Across
the city’s reeking grids,
Broken
walls, cowering pets,
A
distant howl of sirens,
The
air shuddering with
Approaching
helicopters
And the blind rage of smoke rising.
After
the continuing shock
Of
the first few days,
They
realised the ferocity
Of
this nightmare would hold,
Pausing
only to register that
They
were still alive, realised
The
storm had abated, and the dust cleared
To
reveal a growling of desert-coloured tanks
At the corner of the street.
After by Barbara
Marion Rockall
I
stand on the edge of a different world
That
tries to take me over
I
must resist and stay where I belong
But
sometimes the walls of glass and brick are so strong
They
must come down piece by piece
No
matter how long it takes no matter how painful
To
be free, to be strong, is all I pray
One
morning I will wake up as good as new
And
it will be such a wonderful day
Let
me wake up to a morning that holds no terror
After
a peaceful and dreamless night
People
will see the difference in me
And
all the love and support they have given me
Will
once again show me I can cope
No
more lonely times even when I am alone
Joy
in doing simple tasks that have been such a burden
The
garden will blossom, the house will shine
Hands
will be busy doing all the things I love
Alien
eyes will shut and normal bright eyes
Will
look at the world
Colours
will be bright like jewels on a ring
Shopping
will be good with no worries about
What
to bring
Eyes
that follow me and watch my face
Will
no long bother me because I will escape
From
this deep dark place that tries to enfold
All
that I am
I
WILL BE WELL!
VERSE USING RHYME
Highly Commended
Timeslip by Ann
Peat
I
wandered through a hole in time
And
saw her at the gate
A
bonny girl with rosy cheeks
No
more than seven or eight
She
stood beneath a cherry bough
Blowing
bubbles in the sun
I
reached high up to catch them
My
reflection in each one
My
Mum and Dad sat smiling there
Upon
the garden seat
Our
little dog with waving tail
Came
running to my feet
An
apple pie aroma
Carried
on the summer breeze
And
I longed to be, that younger me
Dancing
around the trees
I
tried to tell what paths to choose
To
make a wiser choice
Though
she wouldn’t meet my eyes
And
couldn’t hear my voice
I
longed to warn the life ahead
Of
sorrow and regret
Many
tears I would have saved
If
only we had met …..
I’ll deal with it –
in a moment by Ian Williams
I’m
trying to prioritise,
I’m
trying to get straight.
Sorting
all my paperwork
Is
something that I hate.
I’m
putting all the “urgents”
In
a nice and tidy pile,
Although
everything is urgent
And
there is nothing left to file.
I’m
sorting out important work,
An
approach that cannot fail,
But
I never can get on with them
For
answering my email.
Each
time I try to make some space
To
do important things,
I’m
constantly disturbed again
By insistent cyber “pings”.
I
make a list of all my things,
“To
do” is at its head,
but
I never get to tick things off,
but
add them on instead.
I
try to sort out what goes where
With
papers on the floor,
But
then they’re back in chaos
As a draft blows through the door.
I
carefully block out some time
To
try and end my misery,
But
every time I come to look
Something
else is in my diary.
I
stuff things in my briefcase,
Until
its seams can take no more,
It
creaks and groans then flies agape
And spews them on the floor.
I
try some delegation,
My
attempts somewhat burlesque,
But
everything I cascade down
Ends up back on my desk.
And
as exasperation rises,
And
my patience hits its limit,
Someone
knocks upon my door
And
says, “Have you got a minute?”
They
tell me that they’re feeling stressed,
With
all the work they’ve got.
I
nod, but really want to say,
“And
you think that I am not?”
And
just as they get up to go,
Relieved
of all their strife,
The
peace is once more shattered
As
the ‘phone bursts into life!
The
voice, which hails me down the line,
Is
loud and starts to shriek,
The
report they asked for yesterday
Is
now required last week!
Why
is it not upon their desk?
The
Boss is having kittens!
Trying
to remain quite calm,
I
explain it isn't written.
Trying
not to punch the wall,
As
I tightly clench my fist,
I
mumble that I’ll get it done
And
add it to my list.
Footsteps
and voices arrive outside,
“In
his office, is he?
I’ll
just pop in for a cup of tea.
He’s
never really busy.”
I
try to be assertive
And
say I haven’t got the time,
But
even then he sits right down,
“Two sugars please in mine!”
Thirty
minutes more pass by
And
still he’s drinking tea,
The
piles of work still congregate
And
leer at me with glee.
At
last he leaves the office
And
I dive towards my pen,
But
the computer beeps into my ear,
My
inbox is full again!
I
put the papers back in piles
And
start once more my sorting,
But
find to my annoyance
That
fate once more is thwarting.
The
ringing ‘phone rents the air,
A
director’s urgent call,
She
wants a cup of coffee
And
she’s got no milk at all!
I
grit my teeth and try to smile,
Whilst
all my files I’m dropping,
And,
still talking quite politely,
Suggests
she goes and does some shopping.
Another
interruption,
As
my day starts to unravel,
“Please
can you try and sort this out,
I’ve
not been paid yet for my travel?”
Then
back to all my paperwork,
That’s
spread across my office
And
wonder once again, aloud,
Why
did I take this poison chalice?
Once
more I try to tackle things
When
I get another call,
“I’m
going to have to go off home,
I
don’t feel very well at all.”
A
call comes from the public,
So
I act with some restraint.
Not
happy with staff attitudes,
Can
they please make a complaint?